Original text:
About holiday traveling in English:
We went on a trip to Hainan with our family during this summer holiday. We went there by plane. As soon as we got off the plane, we went to the beach to see the beautiful sand and swam there. At noon we felt hungry so we had lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach. We ate seafood like shrimps and crabs, and drank some abalone soup. We also went to the flower markets and bought lots of flowers. Besides we climbed the mountain and took lots of beautiful pictures.
Revised text:
During our summer holiday, my family and I traveled to Hainan. We flew to the destination and were immediately greeted by the beautiful beaches. The sand was soft and warm underfoot, making swimming a great way to relax. In the afternoon, we decided to have lunch at a seafood restaurant by the beach. We enjoyed fresh shrimps and crabs, along with delicious abalone soup. After that, we made our way to the flower market, where we picked up loads of beautiful flowers. Finally, we hiked up the mountain and captured stunning photos.
All in all, the trip was unforgettable, with its picturesque scenery and countless exciting activities to try. It's clear that I would love to come back and explore more of Hainan.